Can I get some feedback/critique on a silly little project I finally got finished? It seemed alot funnier in my mind than it does now that I've watched the 'completed work', but I'm just wondering what any of you here might think about it.....

http://michaelkaiserwilhelm.blogspot.com/2006/08/space-ode.html

*The title is intentionally spelled that way - to add to the overall ridiculousness of the whole idea.....