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tww1fa
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Okay...
I honestly never thought a haiku would be arousing.

Good job.

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?


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tww1fa
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BDSM Haiku

Dominating you
Your body is my sex toy
Kneeling at my feet

Nipples throb from clamps
Vibrations you can't escape
Breath comes in short gasps.

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?


July 14, 2003 - 5:16pm login or register to post comments

tww1fa
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Your turn. Arouse me in 17 syllables.

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?


July 15, 2003 - 5:05pm login or register to post comments

Raven
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Bubbling Hot Man Boobs
Hairy and swollen with lust
do not make Ace hot.

Raven

It's coming! Wait for it! Wait for it! September 2003!!!

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Some people are like slinkies: Not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.


July 16, 2003 - 1:19am login or register to post comments

iolanthe
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Iolanthe is smiling at Ace and remembering..........

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July 16, 2003 - 2:01am login or register to post comments

Raven
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I looked at this haiku again--and what's good about it is the ambiguity of the last line....

Raven

It's coming! Wait for it! Wait for it! September 2003!!!

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Some people are like slinkies: Not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.


July 16, 2003 - 4:37am login or register to post comments

StephTheGeek
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You said "hot" twice.

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July 16, 2003 - 8:55am login or register to post comments

tww1fa
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Bubbling Hot Man Boobs Hairy and swollen with lust do not make Ace hot.

But, but... Pug makes me quiver with antici....pation!

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?


July 16, 2003 - 12:19pm login or register to post comments

Raven
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Yes, I *noticed* that I said hot twice--I was hoping that I wouldn't have to mention that I used hot as a retroactively ambiguous word. You read "bubbling hot" and you think temperature. Then, you get to the last line, and you think, well what does THAT mean? and then you return to the first, and think, hmmm does THAT hot mean something similarily ambiguous.

Geez, I think I tried to hard--cause evidently my poetic genius is WASTED on you mere Mother-Goosers P

Raven

It's coming! Wait for it! Wait for it! September 2003!!!

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Some people are like slinkies: Not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.


July 16, 2003 - 1:05pm login or register to post comments

Haddock-Boy
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I can't write haikus...
something about syllables...
I don't understand.

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Sanity the playground for the unimaginative.

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July 16, 2003 - 3:49pm login or register to post comments

Haddock-Boy
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b d s and m
something else I don't quite get
I don't much like pain.

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Sanity the playground for the unimaginative.

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July 16, 2003 - 3:51pm login or register to post comments

Raven
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Black and white all around
Which is which and where is grey?
Push the lines you know

Bad things are for a reason
Pain is just another sensation
Why discard what life offers?

Balance must be kept
Change all your preconceptions
Bad thrown in with good

Raven

It's coming! Wait for it! Wait for it! September 2003!!!

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Some people are like slinkies: Not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.


July 16, 2003 - 4:04pm login or register to post comments

StephTheGeek
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Waiting for the drop
To tumble from candle's flame;
Anticipation

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Kneeling at your feet
Naked and barely breathing
May I please you, Sir?

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I am immobile
Yet so free in this bondage
Aching for your touch

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July 16, 2003 - 4:44pm login or register to post comments

tww1fa
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Kneeling at your feet Naked and barely breathing May I please you, Sir?

Ohhh... very nice.

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?

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There's a thin line between genius and insanity - where's my eraser?


July 16, 2003 - 5:26pm login or register to post comments

tahlmorra
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Cloth against warm flesh
Ripples in the satin move
In time with passion

"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail."
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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July 16, 2003 - 6:11pm login or register to post comments

ambrosia
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I'm not so good with haikus.
I always felt that they were simply a lesson in poetry theory.

I *do* have poetic lyrics along this line of thought, which sound better with the music behind them and me singing them, but they still get the message across.

I don't want to thread jack (because we all know Steph will kick me out if I do....) so I won't post them right now. Since we're all so very talented with our haikus. All except me.

I have a very weird friend that gifts Master with strange haikus at least once a year....*she* has real talent with haikus. Talent that will cause your brain to crawl out your ear and scratch your head for you, but still...

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July 17, 2003 - 10:39am login or register to post comments

Raven
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And we haven't even TOLD you about the dream involving superheroes vs. the legions of hell.

Yeah, she's a great friend. Totally creative and more than slightly intelligent. )

Raven

It's coming! Wait for it! Wait for it! September 2003!!!

btw, you should see the paintings she did of ambrosia and I back in grade 13.

Edited by - Raven on Jul 17 2003 25240 PM

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July 17, 2003 - 2:52pm login or register to post comments

moonchilde
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Wrists silkenly bound.

Ass cheeks pinked with my hand prints.

Soft sighs of pleasure.

Edited by - moonchilde on Jul 17 2003 52352 PM

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July 17, 2003 - 5:19pm login or register to post comments

tww1fa
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slave cannot say no
Master makes all decisions
Peace is lack of choice

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December 27, 2004 - 3:53pm login or register to post comments

Toothpaste
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rope is tightly bound
secretly though, I do not
wish to escape this

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whips crack, leather binds
how I missed that single tail
thrashing againts my skin

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